processessay范文

Ⅰ 自主招生个人陈述范文(急求!!)

高三学生写给人大的自荐信

尊敬的中国人民大学自主招生领导：

您好!我是陕西省西安市西安中学高三学生***。我希望通过贵校的自主招生来实现我在中国人民大学学习的梦想，感谢您在百忙中抽出时间审阅我的申请材料。

一直以来，中国人民大学对我都有很大的吸引力，她有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，

丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，为社会培养出许多杰出人才，是国家教育部直属的“211”工程和“985”工程重点建设大学，有许多专业在国内都名列前茅。近年我校许多优秀学生都不约而同的选择贵校为第一志愿，我也非常渴望能在明年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为贵校的一名学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。

从小学习成绩一直领先的我，凭借自己的努力考入自己理想的高中——西安中学，经过三年的锤炼，我已经从一个简单明快的女该成长为意志坚强、底蕴深厚、成熟内敛、热爱生活、有爱心、有同情心、有上进心、德智体全面发展的优秀学生。

我性格开朗，兴趣广泛，天文地理、国内国际形势、音乐美术都会引起我极大的兴趣与关注。我喜欢参加学校组织的各种活动，在西安中学建校100周年庆典活动中，我积极主动加入到自愿者的行列，在社会实践中得到了锻炼;我喜欢写作，参加了校组织的作文大赛，并获得三等奖，在此收获了许多知识，同时也发觉自己的不足;我喜欢唱歌，参加了校园歌手大赛，虽然没有入围，但锻炼了自己的勇气;我喜欢电脑制作，高一时生物课幻灯制作，我总是代表小组制作出最精彩的作品，使我在计算机软件的运用上有了进步。

我热爱生活，始终对生活充满信心和希望。在这个美丽的世界上，我享受着春花的美丽，秋月的温馨，夏雨的激情，冬雪的坚韧。我喜欢感受快乐，我希望把快乐传递给我身边的每一个人，我为强者欢呼，为弱者流泪，我相信送人玫瑰手留余香。我在班上有很好的同学缘不只是由于我的班干部职务，更来自我单纯、直率、热情的性格。我会常常不厌其烦地给同学讲一道已经讲过多少遍的数学题，我会郑重其事地给同学公开我学习英语的最佳诀窍，我会在学习之余和同学一起去图书馆遨游于知识的海洋里，一起去ktv陶醉在美妙的旋律中。

我是一个做事果断、有主见的人，愿意把主动权掌握的自己的手里，我喜欢积极主动地学习，那种轻松没有压力的学习环境更容易达到事半功倍的效果，我玩的时候会尽情的忘乎所以，但我在学习的时候会全身心地投入进去。一旦面对着困难，便会很本能地把全部潜力发挥出来。我常常用更少的时间就能学会别人在标准的学习时间内才能获取的知识，我总是花费别人的一部分时间而完成和别人同样的作业任务。在高中历次的期中期末考试中，我的成绩大多领先，在最近的一次考试中，我取得了全年级第六名的好成绩。这些都源自我科学的学习方法和良好的学习习惯。作为班上的学习委员，我工作认真负责，被评为西安中学优秀班干部，并获得西安市未央区区级三好学生的荣誉。

中国人民大学，是我梦寐以求的大学殿堂，假如我这次有幸上人大，我将计划我在人大的努力方向，人大有法学、哲学、历史学、文学等六个人文学科，我希望我能在其中之一汲取知识，不仅是知识，更有献身祖国，为民族复兴贡献一份力量的情操。在学术活跃的人大，我将努力参加一些团体、论坛和各种活动，弥补我以前的不足，锻炼我的能力，把自己磨砺成一个中国人民大学学生所具备的独特文化品位、非凡才能和良好综合素质的优秀人才。

恳请贵校领导能够接受我的申请，实现我的理想。

此致

Ⅱ 求一篇英文business essay关于leadership的范文。。。不用太高分的 只想知道怎么写 万分感谢~~

资料来源http://www.answers.com/topic/leadership

Leadership is the ability of a company's management to make sound decisions and inspire others to perform well. Effective leaders are able to set and achieve challenging goals, to take swift and decisive action even in difficult situations, to outperform their competition, to take calculated risks and to persevere in the face of failure. Strong communication skills, self-confidence, the ability to manage others and a willingness to embrace change also characterize good leaders.

Leadership is the process through which an indivial tries to influence another indivial or a group of indivials to accomplish a goal. Leadership is valued in our culture, especially when it helps to achieve goals that are beneficial to the population, such as the enactment of effective preventive-health policies. An indivial with leadership qualities can also improve an organization and the indivials in it, whether it be a teacher who works to get better teaching materials and after-school programs or an employee who develops new ideas and procts and influences others to invest in them.

Leadership can be exhibited in a variety of ways and circumstances. Mothers and fathers show leadership in raising their children with good values and encouraging them to develop to their potential. Teachers show it in inspiring students to learn and to develop their intellectual capacity. Health care workers can be leaders and develop services that meet the needs of the communities they serve, or work in collaboration with other organizations to create cost-effective, prevention-oriented programs and services.

Many studies have been done and many books and articles have been published on this subject. Through this work a consistent set of leadership attributes has emerged. An effective leader does most, if not all, of the following:

•Challenge the Process—search out challenging opportunities, take risks, and learn from mistakes.
•Inspire others to come together and agree on a future direction or goal— create a shared vision by thinking about the future, having a strong positive vision, and encouraging others to participate.
•Help others to act—help others to work together, to cooperate and collaborate by developing shared goals and building trust, and help to make others stronger by encouraging them to develop their skills and talents.
•Set an example—behave in ways that are consistent with professed values and help others to achieve small gains that keep them motivated, especially when a goal will not be achieved quickly.
•Encourage others—recognize each indivial's contributions to the success of a project.
Another way of defining leadership is to acknowledge what people value in indivials that are recognized as leaders. Most people can think of indivials they consider to be leaders. Research concted in the 1980s by James Kouzes and Barry Posner found that a majority of people admire, and willingly follow, people who are honest, forward-looking, inspiring, and competent

An indivial who would like to develop leadership skills can profit from the knowledge that leadership is not just a set of exceptional skills and attributes possessed by only a few very special people. Rather, leadership is a process and a set of skills that can be learned.

Read more: http://www.answers.com/topic/leadership#ixzz1Dr9dtTPL

Ⅲ Expository Essay该怎么写跟别的Essay有什么不同

An essay is a literary prose form which aims to present facts or ideas in a straightforward and direct method. It was recognized at a much later stage as an independent form of prose. Many a times, it is the unrestricted, free flowing thought-process of the writer presented on the paper. This discussion would deal specifically with how to write an expository essay rather how to write a good expository essay. Firstly, an expository writing is one which is used to explain, describe and inform the reader what a writer wants to convey. Writing an expository essay can be an easy job if the writer follows a few essential steps.

Ⅳ classification essay怎么写

分三个部分

1.main idea主题 example

2.supporting parts{details)(细节)

3.concluding sentence 结束语

一篇ESSAY最少要三句话,就是上面所写的大的主体.

classification essay是指分类作文

例句

1.

Conclusions SF-3000 can be used in routine classification preliminary screening essay;

结论SF-3000分类结果可作为常规分类的初筛试验。
2.

This chapter style as the other, classification essay discusses the stylistic features of Zhang.

此章以文体为别，分类论述张氏散文的个体特征。
3.

In the first part, it will state the present situation of essay teaching in middle school by the definition and classification of essay so as to put the theory foundation for the essay affective ecation.

在第一部分，首先对散文的含义及其分类和中学散文教学现状进行了论述，为散文情感教学打下了理论基础。
4.

On the base of a classification of university the essay founded a model of comprehensive ranking system through Analytical Hierarchy process, which evaluated different university by different ranking system.

文中利用层次分析法，将我国高校按照办学层次和履行社会职能侧重点的不同进行初步分类，并在此基础上，首次尝试建立了不同类型高等学校综合排名的指标体系。
5.

Chapter 3 summarizes the 3G value-add service, includes confirm the concept of wireless streaming media value-add service and classification. Besides, the essay analyses the Service characteristic, the present development situation and application outlook.

第三章针对基于3G的增值业务进行了专门的概述，包括对无线流媒体增值业务的概念界定和分类，业务特征及其发展现状和应用前景作了分析。

Ⅳ 雅思大作文范文：工作满足感跟工作稳定性哪个好

题目：
Somebody thinks job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others hold the opposite view: job permanent is much more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
一些人认为工作满足感比工作稳定性更重要，而另一些人认为人们不能总是期望享受工作，一份稳定的工作才是更重要的。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。
7分：
1.固定工作可以满足员工的基本生活需求。因为没有人可以逃离现实。每天我们要面临各种各样的开销。相对稳定的工作可以支付这些开销。另外长期在一个公司更容易蝴蝶晋升因为他们对公司忠诚。
2.那些提倡追寻他们喜欢工作的人把工作的满意度当成选择工作的首要条件。他们认为只有和友好的同事和灵活的工作时间下工作才能激发他们的潜能更好的完成工作任务。
3.我认为世界上没有完美的工作，我们能做的就是找一个相对合适的工作。没有多年的努力和坚持很难获得职业安全感。
范文赏析：
首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 +作家立场
Alarmingly, various stories concerning crimes have been pushing into spotlight. Conflicting ideas clash in finding out the root causes of misdeeds. My stand is that external reasons have a bigger influence on those misconcts. Nobody is born to be a criminal.
点评：淡化模板;观点鲜明。
解析：
1. various stories 公众新闻报道
2. concerning 关于
3. have been pushing into spotlight …… 成为关注的焦点
4. conflicting ideas clash in …… 矛盾的观点在……方面互相碰撞
解析：clash v碰撞
二段：正方三个观点的展开：
My arguments could be easily explored. One contributing factor triggering manifold malefactions could be owed to the external circumstances in which the one is raised. To put in details, in some poverty-stricken or violent families, children are usually not properly taken care of and they stand few chances of receiving fine ecation, it is likely that such children may easily be led astray and even worse, they may conct some anti-social offences. Still, pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media, have a really adverse impact on the young because the young can, in most cases, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, thus，it is possible for them to turn to a life of crime. Last, many perilous procts that could be harnessed commit crimes are very easily and cheaply available to the youths. In fact, guns are sold in a number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for some people to embark on the criminal road.
三段：反方二个观点的展开
Granted, some people might remain suspicious of my stand and believe that those perpetrators are born to be evil. Some people argue that habitual malefaction is the main root cause of high crime rate. As for those felons such as gangsters boss or professional blackguards, to break the law is to take revenge on the society which they think unfair. Besides, some people contend that such is human nature to be greedy, selfish and jealous, which accounts for many types of crimes. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others.
解析：
1. habitual malefaction 惯性犯罪
2. felons 重罪人
3. gangsters boss or professional blackguards 黑帮大哥和职业流氓
4. take revenge on the society which they think unfair 报复认为不公平的社会
5. vain and avaricious 虚荣的贪婪的
尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由
In a nutshell, I re-affirm my stand that different crimes could be combination of various elements, however, in comparison with evil nature, external factors actually play a profound influence in leading some immature or inexperienced people to go astray.
7分：
1.如果一个工作紧紧可以稳定我们的生活确保我们的衣食住行，那仅仅是谋生。如果有些东西可以促使我们有无尽的激情，一定是我们执着追求的事业。以自己的故事为例，讲述自己曾经有个稳定的工作但是总是感觉生活空虚后来选择了开始创业。所以成功应该是我们事业的选择和自己兴趣的结合。
2.很多人认为如果频繁的换工作盲目的追求不显示的梦想会陷入经济困难。还有一种说法一个稳定的工作会找到完美的伴侣，传统观点看年轻人有稳定的工作更容易赢得他们伴侣的青睐。
The proportion of people’s life spent working is very high，hence，feelings about one's job must mirror how an indivial feels about his or her life, in this sense, job satisfaction is indeed important for people’s well-being. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their desirable careers. The connotation of ideal job never fails to sparkle people’s heated debate. Personally speaking, a career that brings us the minimum sense of fulfillment is superior to a stable job.
For a start，if a job can simply stabilize our lives and ensure our accommodations, it is simply a means of earning a living. By contrast, if there is anything that can stimulate our endless passion, tap our unlimited potentials and enhance our happiness index, it must the career that we have a burning desire to undertake. Also, the debate reminds me of myself, I am now embarking on self-employment. Five years ago, I had a seemingly stable job, namely, a civil servant, more freedom and meager salary is the feature of my job. However, my life always felt empty and I was fed up with my former job. After careful consideration, I hardened my heart to carve out my own career. Of course, the process is tough, however, I live my life to the full, I always get my hands full and have limited free time at my own disposal. Luckily enough, my sense of happiness and contentment graally grows on me. Therefore, it is a success that if we can combine our career options with personal interests.
As a proverb goes, one’s meat is another man’s poison. Others, however, might remain suspicious of my stand. Some people argue that it is also possible that one falls into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently or blindly pursue unrealistic dreams. Another argument hold by some people is that a stable job indicates the odds of finding ideal partner of life, seen from the traditional perspective, a young alt who enjoys stable job stands more chances of wining the heart of his or her new date.
To sum up, my stand is that more and more modern people can no longer be dependent nor want to be dependent on a single career. In comparison with stable job, choosing the careers that our hearts desire deserves more praises.
6.5分：
1.一些人认为职业满意度比职业安全感更重要。理由是如果人们对工作很满意就自然会有热情去做，反过来会有更出色的表现。
2.我认为工作不总是很有趣并且长久的事业感一直很重要，比如一个产品经理想要取得成功必须要了解各种客户的需求。一个更有力的说明是科学家想要确定太阳黑子的周期。需要花费他毕生的时间去观察和记录数据。如果没有持久辛苦付出是不会尝到成功的滋味。
A job can provide people with various things including pay, perks, and reputation. But if one thinks about the significance or at very least the purpose of doing the job, he/she must really consider the relative importance between job satisfaction and job stability.
Some believe that the sense of satisfaction outweighs that of security in the workplace. The reason is that if people are satisfied with their job, they will naturally have more zest for what they do, and this can in turn motivate them to achieve better job performance. By comparison, although a high level of job security suggests that people can keep their jobs, those who value it more would have less incentive to work hard, and thus be less likely to reach comparable achievements.
However, I personally would agree with the view that jobs are not always enjoyable and a constant career bear more importance. For instance, if a proct manager wants to succeed, he/she will have to study the varying preferences of consumers before launching any potentially popular proct. A more convincing example is the scientists who identified the cycle of sunspot. He spent his entire life in an observatory tracking and recording the astronomical data. None of these works are pleasant things to do, but without such continuous painstaking work in an occupation, people will be unable to taste the thrill of success, and can even end up leading a fruitless life.
In conclusion, my own view is that job satisfaction is more important than job security, but to accomplish any meaningful goals, one must go through the repetition of endless boring work.
6分：
1.固定工作可以满足员工的基本生活需求。因为没有人可以逃离现实。每天我们要面临各种各样的开销。相对稳定的工作可以支付这些开销。另外长期在一个公司更容易晋升因为他们对公司忠诚。
2.那些提倡追寻他们喜欢工作的人把工作的满意度当成选择工作的首要条件。他们认为只有和友好的同事和灵活的工作时间下工作才能激发他们的潜能更好的完成工作任务。
3.我认为世界上没有完美的工作，我们能做的就是找一个相对合适的工作。没有多年的努力和坚持很难获得职业安全感。
It is true that seeking a decent job is not as easy as decades ago e to the economic recession and competitive job market. In this circumstance, although some believe indivials cannot always enjoy their own jobs and seeking a permanent job is necessary: others still insist that a sense of satisfaction toward job is crucial. The different opinions would be discussed in the following essay.
On the one hand, a permanent job can guarantee employee’s basic needs: so its importance should not be ignored . This is because almost no one can escape from the reality. Everyday, people are facing with a variety of expenses: such as food shelter, transport and even ecation tuition for children. With a relatively stable job: citizens: especially those in middle aged can cover most expenses. In addition, those who stay in the same company or institution are more likely to get a promotion as they show the loyalty towards their companies. By contrast, those who change their jobs frequently may meet unintended outcomes. For example, they may find it difficult to support themselves and raise their family members.
On the other hand, those advocates for pursuing a job they love might regard job satisfaction as the priority when finding an employment. They believe only working with friendly colleagues and employers and under a flexible working time schele, can they fulfill their potential and accomplish all tasks well, tins idea is unrealistic. For example, dozens of young graates have the bitter result because of their immature thoughts - that is to say unemployment.
In my opinion: people having an important job are more likely to have a promising job career and wellbeing. There is no perfect job in the world and therefore the only thing people can do is to find a suitable job rather than a perfect one.

Ⅵ 自主招生教师推荐信范文

各位领导：

"性相近也，习相远也。"中西方学校在招生时都本着择优录取的原则，学生也奉努力提高德智体修养为圭臬。但是由于文化思维的差异，中西方学校衡量学生优劣的标准和方法不同，学生展示才华实力的机会和技巧也各异。本文拟从分析中西文化思维差异对留学文书写作内容的影响入手，以有助于提高此类文书写作的技巧。因篇幅有限，本文讨论仅限于个人陈述、推荐信和简历。中国的学校主要通过考试和官式档案来录取学生，注重学生以往学习、研究或工作中取得的成绩，却不大去了解学生个性，思维和潜力的差别；国外的学校主要通过考试和申请材料来录取学生，认定学生在具备必要的学习、研究或工作资格以后，更注意比较他们在个性、思维和潜力方面的差别。所以中国学生在展示才华实力的时候喜欢泛泛地枚举他们的成就，中国教师在推荐学生的时候也喜欢概括地谈论弟子的优秀，措辞多中规中矩；国外学生在展示才华实力的时候喜欢假借得意之事刻画自己与众不同的个性、思维和潜力，国外教授在推荐学生的时候也喜欢简明形象地述说弟子优秀且与众不同之处，措辞求平稳生动。正是由于这种文化思维的不同，中国学生即使在学习、研究或工作能力上与国外学生不相上下、甚至胜出一筹，但是因为不善于运用西方的思维方式在申请材料中展示才华实力，而只能望国外名校兴叹。
简历留学简历的内容要求集中强项、清晰明白，包括个人信息、教育背景、工作背景、荣誉和奖励、学术活动、发表著作、课外活动、参加团体、兴趣爱好等等要素。由于不了解西方读者的认知习惯，中国学生在写作中易陷入两种思维误区：一是过分轻视，了了数行就完事；二是过分重视，芝麻西瓜一起抓。前者除欠缺要素以外，常见的失误有：（1）每项的时间不够明确。一般而言，教育经历和工作经历要有起始与终止时间的年月，荣誉和奖励及参加团体要有具体的年份等等。（2）工作经历中要概括地叙述主要职责和主要项目。（3）发表著作要严格按照西方的标准来写。（4）参加团体最好列出在其中担任的角色等等。后者则包括：（1）重复陈述。例如在教育背景中提及奖学金后，在荣誉和奖励中重复说明。（2）列举琐事。例如把既与申请无益、也不能说明什么的六年前检查宿舍卫生的事情写进来。（3）没有重点。例如在工作背景中把一般性职责描述和项目内职责描述同等对待等等。
推荐信推荐信的内容要求真实可信，简明形象。我们在国内需要推荐信的时候往往找单位的最高领导或学界泰斗，推荐人则泛泛地谈论被推荐人的品性业绩。所以推荐信在国内作用有限（阅读者更看重官式文件提供的信息或人际关系），使用也有限（一般只用于求职推荐）。相反，作为用信誉担保的文件，推荐信在信誉制度比较完善的西方社会里却发挥着很重要的作用。它是阅读者了解被推荐人的重要途径之一，被广泛地使用于求学、求职，甚至评选、租房。在国外，推荐人一般是具备必要资格而且最了解被推荐人学习、工作、品性等某个或某几个方面的人，推荐信的内容要求真实、准确、完整，而且与被推荐人要达到的目的有直接或间接的联系。鉴于中西文化思维的差异，中国学生在准备留学推荐信的时候要注意下面几点：（1）推荐人要能够有较多机会了解被推荐人，而且几个推荐人能够从不同角度展示被推荐人的学习、工作和品性。所以被推荐人不能一味去找对自己了解甚少的院士或外国教授，也不能几个推荐人说来说去只反映了某个方面却不能反映其它方面。（2）从一般阅读者的常识看，推荐信的内容是合理的。如果公司的老板知道被推荐人上大学时某门课程的具体分数，或者大学的普通任课教师知道被推荐人全部课程的平均分数，一般来说都是不合理的。（3） 切忌推荐信的内容空洞泛泛。在推荐信中，推荐人笼统地列举被推荐人学习、工作、品性各个方面的许多优点，其实效果反而不如在合理的范围内具体地叙述三、四个优点。另外，推荐人与被推荐人之间的关系、接触时间及推荐人的联系方式也都应该写清楚。
个人陈述个人陈述的内容要求翔实独特、合理清晰。一般来说，我们在国内只有做职称（职位）申请或述职报告时使用类似文本，但是内容要求不尽相同。国内的"个人陈述"限于描述本人以往学习、研究或工作中取得的成绩，即使偶尔涉及具体案例也是为了更突出成绩。在某种意义上讲，这种文本就是简历的扩写本。国外的个人陈述则是入学申请人推销自我的最佳机会，不但描述本人以往学习、研究或工作中取得的成绩，而且更注重表现自我的与众不同，特别是假借记忆深刻之事刻画自己鲜明的个性、思维和潜力。这种思维上的不同深深地影响着中西方个人陈述写作的角度和方法。例如在描述某项目中自己的作为时，中国学生多侧重描述理论扎实或技术精湛，国外学生除概述项目背景及所用理论或实物工具外，更侧重说明自己的个性（例如坚忍不拔、团队精神）、思维（例如勤于思考、另辟蹊径）和潜力（例如善于学习、活学活用）等等。虽然个性、思维和潜力方面公认的优点有限，国外的学生往往能够借助自己的具体事例和高超的本族语写作技巧成功地突出自己鲜明的个性。由于不熟悉国外学校招生官员阅读个人陈述的认知习惯，中国学生容易犯以下常见错误：（1）单调乏味的成就叙述。招生官员通过这样的个人陈述只能了解申请人做过什么，却不清楚他是个什么样的人以及怎么思考问题。而且，招生官员每天要阅读几十份申请文件，很可能疏忽这样的个人陈述。（2）适得其反的观点论证。例如，有的申请人喜欢写自己经常加班加点地学习工作以表现勤奋。虽然这种性格在少数特殊情况下是一种美德，但是申请人也许会给招生官员留下低效、不善于利用有效资源和"工作狂"症状的印象。（3）软弱无力的缺陷解释。申请人如果语言成绩或专业成绩不够理想，而在个人陈述中将失败归因于工作繁忙、身体欠佳等等，希望能亡羊补牢。但是，招生官员却会认为你以后在国外遇到类似逆境时不能克服，并且缺乏勇于承担结果的性格。（4）自我否定的负罪情结。申请人也许蓦然发现原先选择的专业根本不适合自己，但没有必要认为这是一个错误。关键在于要用你在以往专业上表现出来的学习能力和研究能力，以及你为转专业表现出来的深思熟虑和充分准备来说服招生官员。（5）矫揉造作的个性描述。有的申请人误解了"个性"的内涵，沉迷于用与申请无关的异事，甚至耸人听闻的事情和不加节制的激情来吸引阅读者的注意力。但招生官员却可能认为这种做法非常愚蠢。切记招生官员想了解的是一个真实的申请人。 西方有句谚语："在罗马城要象罗马人一样做事情。"其实写留学文书的时候，中国学生就应该在保留自己特色的同时，用西方的思维方式去照顾阅读者的认知习惯。只有这样，申请人才能通过这些文件去充分地展示自己的才华潜力，为自己赢得录取的机率。

Ⅶ 旧金山艺术学院本科申请命题critical essay怎么写

这critical essay我虽然不能帮你写，但是我从meeloun教育网帮你收集了一些在
critical essay写作中可能会用到的一些比较有价值的句型，你可以看一下，适当运用到自己的文章当中去哦。自己写不来的话可以找meeloun代劳。
1.The author… begins his argument with an anecdote illustrating … that…
2.The author further develops his argument by broadening the claim of … from…
3.Author exemplifies the…, setting up him to introce the argument that…
4.Having debunked the most outrageous claims of…, author shows the reader the other side of his argument--…
5.Author expands his defense of the argument by discussing …
6.Author introces … to maintain his argument.
7. Author further strengthens his argument by stressing again…
8. Author reinforces the argument made earlier by pointing out…
9.Author summarizes his prior points and shapes them into a coherent thesis statement.
10. To make his argument seem balanced, author moves to another point in his argument about…
11. Author strengthens his points made earlier by summarizing…
12. Author ends the passage by restating the thesis.
13. Author builds an argument to persuade his audience that … through the presentation of statistics, connections to social media as well as using specific diction to establish his argument.
14. Author uses statistics and facts, as presented by…, in order to show … in order to persuade his audience that …
15. Author begins his essay with the statistic saying that…
16. Author uses this to build his argument by evoking his audience to think that…
17. He uses… to establish the fact that …, asking his audience to consider…
18. Author says this to evoke a concern within audience about the truth in media. author accounts for that …
19. Author uses personal pronouns to show that…, not only establishing his credibility on the subject, but also aiding in his persuasion of his audience by allowing…
20. Through his word choice, author further establishes his argument by ascribing …
21. In author’s “…” editorial for the…, he argues against …
22. By the end of this piece the readers will likely find themselves nodding in agreement with …
23. Author, like any good writer, employs tactical reasoning and persuasive devices to plead with audience to take his side.
24. “… ,” author ventures, his first utilization of a cold, hard fact.
25. The truth in the numbers is undeniable, and he cites his sources promptly, making the statement that much more authentic.
26. Not only does author spread the facts with numbers, he also does so with trends.
27. His thoroughness in this regard carefully builds his argument against this piece … , this is just one of the many ways he spreads his opposition.
28. Additionally, author appeals to the ethical and emotional side of indivial.
29. With key phrases like “…” and “… ,” author activates …
30. While one might view this as selfish, author reassures the reader that they are not alone in feeling this, further contributing to his argument.
31. By putting himself beside the reader as a … , he equals them, and makes himself more likeable in the process.
32. Appealing to…, too, author qualifies that they “…”
33. An article focusing on the choice between “…” and how that choice might…, but by adjusting his diction (i.e. using well known phrases, selecting words with strong connotations), author creates something out of the ordinary.
34. It is with word choice such as “…” that the author reveals the ….
35. Negative words with specifically poor connotations also aid author in his persuasive struggle.
36. “…,””…,” and ”…” all depict a …tone of …, surely helping author to spread his message.
37. It is through many rhetorical devices that author sells his argument.
38. Author has created a highly plausible argument that …
39. He has developed valid claims that are backed up with crucial evidence and has been able to properly persuade the reader by appealing to logos and other rhetorical strategies.
40. Author uses his words and research to reason with the reader and explain …
41. However, author delivers an appealing argument…
42. This excerpt creates another claim that leaves the reader wondering if … are really worth it.
43. These past two claims are connected well because they both draw the reader back to the idea of …
44. Another claim by author, “…”
45. Evidence is a key component of this passage and author is sure to include this when presenting us with key facts.
46. He references important agencies such as the …
47. Evidence he also uses are facts such as, “…”
48. These facts back up author’s claims that … are the better choice.
49. Without evidence, his passage would not mean a thing to us readers and we would never be able to believe what he has said.
50. Persuasive elements are what make this passage successful.
51. He appeals to logos when stating all of his claims about…, but he also appeals to pathos because this passage described…
52. Throwing examples at us, “…” persuade the reader as well.
53. With rhetorical strategies and direct examples, author is clearly able to persuade the reader to choose…. next time.
54. Author has made the choice obvious with his persuasive and effective passage.
55. He has been able to develop several ideas and backed them up with evidence that us readers can trust.
56. After reading this passage, there seems to be no other choice than…

Ⅷ 求一篇雅思写作范文

你好，我是世纪雅思学生，我问我们老师，一下是我的老师给回答的：
In present-day society, plastic containers and utensils are extensively used in big cities and the countryside alike. They are so common-place and I would hazard the guess that each one of us has seen, at one time or another, the unsightly scene of plastic bags swirling in the wind. These plastic shopping bags, chopsticks, to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles, to name but a few, when not properly disposed of, create a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse. Therefore, some people argue that we have embarked upon a “throw-away” era when plastic rubbish is largely mped indiscriminately and irresponsibly (this act is often labeled “white pollution” on account of the color of plastic wastes). Personally, I wholeheartedly support their view.
There are numerous reasons for this worrisome phenomenon coming into being. To begin with, at present the bulk of people who shop and/or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed, uninformed or misinformed about the pernicious influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem, which is the main culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic wastes. The chief component of such trash is polythene, which cannot decompose on landfill sites over the process of the next hundreds of years if no major scientific breakthrough comes along in polythene treatment. Thus, such trash must be dealt with collectively rather than be scattered like tumbleweeds. Secondly, the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating ware is largely fuelled by the surging, headlong consumerism. Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight, cheaper (often free of charge) in price and water-proof in performance. These superior properties make them preferable to their paper and cloth counterparts in customers’ eyes; and as consumer satisfaction reigns supreme in contemporary society, compared with superb portability, affordability and utility, how to dispose of them is the last thing the customers are concerned about. Additionally, plastic bags, wrap and containers are also commercially feasible since they are cheaper to manufacture, ship and store. These mercenary considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags but over the phasing-out process, few stores and restaurants advocate or encourage the use of environmentally-benign disposal of plastic trash, hence the whole slew of non-biodegradable garbage and environmental hazards ensue.
Given the scale and severity of “white pollution”, we must take immediate steps to address this scourge. In the first place, we must do our utmost to enhance people’s awareness of how persistent and devastating non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our posterity’s. Secondly, retail stores and dining establishments should spare no effort in encouraging their customers to reuse plastic packing items. Furthermore, indiscriminate and irresponsible mping of household garbage or personal junk should be outlawed by the legislature and heavy fines or even jail terms must be imposed on those compulsive litterbugs who fail to get their act together. Then, on the part of the biochemical researchers and technologists, scientific research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effectual ways to convert non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse. Last but not least, the government must not shirk its obligations in mobilizing scientific resources and rallying popular support in the crusade against “white pollution”. Neither should pay just lip service to relevant research and campaigns if no enough funding can be obtained otherwise. Additionally, I am convinced a customer tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags will also help to curb this massive “white pollution”.
The havoc non-biodegradable refuse can wreak on the ecosystem is beyond our imagination. It can eventually devastate soil, water and the aquatic and terrestrial biota. We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the ecosystem irretrievably breaks down under the reign of the minute plastic debris.

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Ⅸ 急~求一留学自荐信范文，或模板

自荐信不用长,但要表达
1) 英语水平
2) 提供评委需要知道的关键内涵, 主要是你为何选该学府,教授和研究课题
3) 表达个人能力-不要平铺直述,最好用个人经历来展示

如果你有具体的资料,我可以协助你,到我空间留言吧!

马克吐温对朋友道歉说:"对不起,我没时间给你写一封短信!" 写一封好的短信比长篇大论难多了!!

TO: Prof. So&So
Faculty of XYZ
Department of ABC
University of PQR

Dear Prof. So&So

[Further to my application made on DDMMYY], I have the pleasure of supplementing it [my application] with this letter of introction to offer you a more rounded view of myself.

As my primary interest is in researching “Topic of Special Interest”, I have done a fair bit of research to locate the best mentor and the best institution to allow me to realize my objectives. Your work in “Area of Special Interest” , especially your publications in “list details…….” , are of particular interest to me and they are the reasons why I seek entry to your university. If admitted, I am able to continue work along the lines of your present research without much training or supervision since I have exposure and actual experience in the following areas: “ list details………”

During my university years, I am used to working in a team environment. For example, list……as many cases as possible to show leadership and effective work in a team environment……
Write up one or two cases to show desirable attributes such as ……innovative, persist in solving problems, hard working and having every good interpersonal skills. (Note: it is quite bland to just quote the words, I am creative, hardworking, reliable etc. etc., no one will take note of this very much; it is far better to offer actual examples in your personal history to show these attributes!!)

In closing, although I have not been to your city, I did a fair bit of investigation on the environs of PQR University and found the people and geography there highly exciting. I am looking forward to settling down there already!

Yours sincerely,
Your prospective student